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Charlotte Balladine's avatar

This is stunning <3

audrey rose's avatar

thank you so much!!

Jeanne Vessantra's avatar

The spaces feel like Angel breath

Kylee's avatar

Now I want a petal dress in the spring.

I love your playful word combinations and how imaginative they sound.

audrey rose's avatar

thank you! i think imagination is one of the most wonderfully important aspects of life :)

Eugenia P. Frankenberg 🥀's avatar

Oh wow, this was GORGEOUS! I love winter poems and this one delivered. The structure, the imagery, the allusions to classic lit…it was vibrant and soft all at the same time! You’re so talented!

audrey rose's avatar

THANK YOU SO MUCH!! i take this in very high regard!! i adore your writing and i always appreciate your comments !

Cipher⁉️✨✨'s avatar

I love how the formatting of the poem when you get to the root of the tree part looks like a tree root system :)

audrey rose's avatar

thank you so much for noticing that !! i love when people recognize form and nature in language!!

Delaney Langdon's avatar

omg LOVE this

audrey rose's avatar

thanks so much delaney!!!!

tahasyn⭐'s avatar

Love it!!!!

dia's avatar

I love this 💕💕

audrey rose's avatar

thank you so much dia, i appreciate your support 💗💗💗

shreya's avatar

absolutely adore the movement of the poem, its absolutely ethereal

audrey rose's avatar

thank you so much shreya!

Ella 🪐🎩💫's avatar

The placement of the words felt like watching rain fall, thank you for the lovely poem! 🤍

audrey rose's avatar

of course of course!!! i’m so glad you liked it :) 💗

may | مَيّ's avatar

This is so beautiful <3

audrey rose's avatar

thank you so much 🥹💗 i appreciate it

Noa's avatar

oh myy the way the words fall down the page is beautiful thanks for the lovely read!

audrey rose's avatar

i am so so happy you enjoyed it!! thank you for reading!!